Tag: constructive criticism

member name: Andrea B.
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Unrequited Love
by Andrea B.
views: 13 | rating: 9.6 | comments: 5
March 09, 2007 12:21 AM EST -- As i sit. Looking outside At myself In the rain. I laugh Great big smiles. Feigned, sneering At the girl in the rain. Sitting on a stone; Her own severed head. A hand over the hole in her heart. . . . more
March 09, 2007 12:13 AM EST -- Swim with me through this liquid universe; The darkest corners of my mind. I feel your touch, I hold you, (Don't let go). But You are not here. Where are you, my love? Hiding in an infinitely secret . . . more
Final Letter For My Love
by Andrea B.
views: 13 | rating: 9.7 | comments: 2
April 16, 2007 01:56 AM EDT -- Don't you remember? We sat together. Near the break of dawn, Just one last time. Wondering whether Or why We weren't dearer To Time.   Don't you hear me? My eyes spoke so freely . . . more
March 09, 2007 12:23 AM EST -- Let’s go for a walk.   Be careful! The rocks are tricky. Don’t slip!   I’m scared. This is dangerous.   Don’t be. I’m here. Hold my hand.   Oh . . . more
Old Age
by Andrea B.
views: 13 | rating: 9.5 | comments: 5
March 31, 2007 07:23 AM EDT -- Because When you get old Nobody knocks at your door Anymore. Not the river with its fish of silver Nor the young foal with moistened eyes Not boys now men that loved you once Nobody.   Just . . . more
 
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